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I have good news and bad news. The good news: I made my deadline! The bad news: It's short and I don't know how well it came out.



Jounouchi would've bit his lip if it hadn't still be so sensitive from Kaiba biting it. So instead he just let his breathing tighten as tears began to well in his eyes. He felt Kaiba touch him again, gently.

Jounouchi batted Kaiba's hand away. "I said get your hands offa... offa..." Jounouchi was unable to finish his sentences as the tears that were welling began to fall.

~

Jono didn't know how long the pharaoh and the priest had been standing in silence without speaking. It had probably only been a few milliseconds. It felt like several years.

"Jono's wrists..." the Pharaoh began, eyes glittering.

"Wh-what about them?" Seth responded, trying desperately to keep his composure.

Atemu's eyes narrowed, still glittering. "Didn't I explicitly tell you not to hurt him?"

"I don't recall," Seth began and Atemu stepped forward.

"You lie," the shorter of the two declared. "I did tell you."

It occured to Jono that he really could run now. He could run and they wouldn't notice. He could get away...

He couldn't get away. Jono didn't know why, but he felt as if he couldn't leave.

He say the Pharaoh take another step forward. Maybe he imagined it, but Jono thought he saw the High Priest flinch...

"Wait," Jono called weakly. "Wait. Don't hurt him." He didn't know what would happen to Seth if he didn't intervene. He should've been able to be hungry to find out, but somehow, he wasn't.

Stupid Seth. Stupid, mean, evil Seth.

"Don't hurt Seth. He... It was my fault," Jono cried, causing Atemu to look at him oddly. Jono continued, mumbling, "I was bad. He had to... I was bad. I had to get punished, he..."


*winces*

It's Lethe's go now. I only hope I didn't screw anything up TOO badly...

Date: 2004-09-10 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alecto-chan.livejournal.com
xD

Jono actually jumps in to defend Seth. Now that's new. Ok, maybe not so new. Excuse me, I'm not quite coherent yet. -_-

Date: 2004-09-10 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkmus.livejournal.com
o_____________________o

The plot thickens!

*geeks*

Yeah.

Good job tying in both times in such a short piece. ^^``

Date: 2004-09-10 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkmus.livejournal.com
It's okay. *pets*

Date: 2004-09-11 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rans-curse.livejournal.com
o.o Oh the fun with explaining that little twisty shiny bit of ---Oooh shiiiiny.

(...Um. Just in case? My computer set itself on fire. Yes. Literally. So I'm kind of... out of a computer. For a while. <<;;)

Date: 2004-09-12 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheeky-duckie.livejournal.com
ooh, and the plot thickens! ^^v I liked it! short -- ;.; -- but intriguing. go you! <3
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